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kandy0409 's review for:
Fated Mates and When to Keep Them
by A.J. Sherwood
Enjoyable but I can’t help but find the shortcuts annoying bit frustrating…
Noel sees his brother and never mentions the huge deal about his new boyfriend and where he has been all week but they act like he knows. MCs never has a conversation about experience yet F knew that N had none. These are two of the conversations I would want to be on page, or at the very least mention that they actually occurred. The jump from F be8ng against a relati9nship t9 them being in one was too quick.
Good ideas and flows well but could be better if it was fleshed out a bit more.
Noel sees his brother and never mentions the huge deal about his new boyfriend and where he has been all week but they act like he knows. MCs never has a conversation about experience yet F knew that N had none. These are two of the conversations I would want to be on page, or at the very least mention that they actually occurred. The jump from F be8ng against a relati9nship t9 them being in one was too quick.
Good ideas and flows well but could be better if it was fleshed out a bit more.