A review by kelbybooks
Second Star by Alyssa Sheinmel

3.0

Okay so I techinically am gonna give this book a 2.5 stars. This book had so much potential I can't even begin to tell you!! It could of been so amazing but instead it was rushed and kinda sloppy. Everything interesting happened within like 10-15 pages, all other pages were just much longer than need be fillers. So this book is a Peter Pan retelling and is about a love triangle basically. But the thing is her relationship with the "bad boy" happened within like 5 sentences, she hated him and then all the sudden they were cuddling and holding hands, all within the same page. There was no build up it was just BAM and it happened, same with the plot twist, there was no build up to it and it was honestly just confusing. I feel like she could've easily added another 100 pages to make it like 348 pages and made this a good book, I just feel like it was too rushed and just not amazing. The only reason i even give it 2.5 stars is because the plot and characters were amazing I really enjoyed them I just wish we got more on the storyline