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A review by jscarpa14
The Dragonian's Witch by Meg Xuemei X
3.0
For a serial it has potential
So this in my opinion wasn't really a full book, it leaves off mid scene and didn't really seem long enough to warrent separating into multiple parts.
I really think this could have benefitted from Ares point of view, he comes across like a bug slow, stubborn brute who thinks too much with his penis. With a character as intriguing as Freya there has to be more to him than that for him to counter balance Freya, but we don't get the see that because of the single first person point of view.
Again the sex bothered me, the guy kidnapped her, after abusing and threatening the lives of what was essentially her family, but the moment she learns he can touch her she's alternating between begging for sex and trying to run away, and I really don't buy that as a realistic reaction.
Like I said in my other review the world and the plot have endless potential, they're fascinating. The characters presented, especially many of the secondary characters draw you in and make you want this world and story to work. The problem is all that is put on the back burner to make room for more sex scenes, often in places where they don't make a lot of sense. It's like there's some sort of sex quota to be met and they're being thrown in wherever just to do so rather than a natural evolution between the characters.
So this in my opinion wasn't really a full book, it leaves off mid scene and didn't really seem long enough to warrent separating into multiple parts.
I really think this could have benefitted from Ares point of view, he comes across like a bug slow, stubborn brute who thinks too much with his penis. With a character as intriguing as Freya there has to be more to him than that for him to counter balance Freya, but we don't get the see that because of the single first person point of view.
Again the sex bothered me, the guy kidnapped her, after abusing and threatening the lives of what was essentially her family, but the moment she learns he can touch her she's alternating between begging for sex and trying to run away, and I really don't buy that as a realistic reaction.
Like I said in my other review the world and the plot have endless potential, they're fascinating. The characters presented, especially many of the secondary characters draw you in and make you want this world and story to work. The problem is all that is put on the back burner to make room for more sex scenes, often in places where they don't make a lot of sense. It's like there's some sort of sex quota to be met and they're being thrown in wherever just to do so rather than a natural evolution between the characters.