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All Together by Brill Harper
4.0

Innocent nerd and two hot jocks

Alright, I purchased this book on amazon for $3.99. So I had high hopes since I usually read kindle unlimited. And I have to say I was pleasantly surprised!! This book was hot as hell. The characters were all very likable. And the plot of a nerdy virgin exploring her sexual nature with two guys, one the forbidden best friends brother, was great. My only complaint is that the multiple POV were written in blocks rather than going back and forth between characters. The first third of the book was written in penelopes POV, then Fletchers, then Shane’s. The epilogue back to Penelope. I would have really like each of their POV throughout the entire book to know how they each were feeling about the things that were occurring. Also, because of the block sections of POV, when it got towards the end on Fletcher and Shane’s POV, they were beginning to explore their own sexual/mental feelings towards eachother and honestly it kind of felt like Penelope was put on the back burner and the real love story was about fletcher and Shane. Also, I don’t need a ton of drama in books, but the drama/angst in this book was verryyyyyyy low.

I still really enjoyed the book, like I said it was hot as hell, there was just a couple of things I would have preferred differently. Overall, it’s worth the read.