authordanielleforrest 's review for:

Believe it or Knot: Part Two by Harper Wylde

DID NOT FINISH: 72%

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The story is just too damned long. I’m 72% into the second book about this couple and there’s really nothing left but receiving their bites and maybe a final twist. This should have been one book. The kidnapping at the end of book one was completely avoidable seeing as it was fully foreseeable. We all knew it was a bad idea but they did it anyway. The author even gave another option (why couldn’t they have had a representative come to them considering the situation?). They had a sister who worked for the OMA but noooo, they have to drive an hour to go to the office. So contrived. 

Also, the author really doesn’t know what belied means and needs to learn synonyms for sapphiric desperately!