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A review by terrivansteen
Eldmoor: Origins of Blaze by J. P. Feather
3.0
I really loved the concept of this book. Very hunger games-esque but also had dragons. Unfortunately it just didn’t really come through for me.
The premise is good and the idea and general plot are great but there are a lot of plot holes and things that were skipped over when they really should have been explained. It definitely seems like it needs more editing especially considering the author mixes up names at one point. One of the characters is segsually assaulted and almost r@ped and it’s just brushed over which I wasn’t a fan of.
I won’t be reading book 2 but a friend is going to when it comes out so I am looking to hearing how the story develops from her.
The premise is good and the idea and general plot are great but there are a lot of plot holes and things that were skipped over when they really should have been explained. It definitely seems like it needs more editing especially considering the author mixes up names at one point. One of the characters is segsually assaulted and almost r@ped and it’s just brushed over which I wasn’t a fan of.
I won’t be reading book 2 but a friend is going to when it comes out so I am looking to hearing how the story develops from her.