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Apprentice
by Rachel E. Carter
200th book( ╹▽╹ )
*sigh* ooof prepare for a full-blown rant
it makes me sad to say this esp bc I adored the first book so much but this was seriously so disappointing :/
where do I even begin
- the pacing was so whack, I get that the author was trying to fit specific timelines in each book but its just too rushed and failed to establish a solid feel of things. certain things felt like a summary while lingering on other things,,,like the whole things was literally training, mock battle, petty stuff, serious fight against enemy but let's just skip all the explanation and go back to the petty unimportant drama the next day and more mock battles like aughasdfghjkl and thus leds me to my next point
- the lack of plot, worldbuilding, and explanation to much-needed things! Idk maybe it's just me but who the fuck is their enemy? who are their allies? why are they attacking? wtf is going on with the apprentice stuff? why do they keep moving and going back to their former school? and A WHOLE lotta other stuff that didn't stick to my brain bc it was so annoying
- and oh gawd the downfall of the whole book, the fucking love triangle!!! + ryiah!!!!! this in itself is a whole another thing! and more than anything im so mad at the fact that this book made me hate romance--something I cannot live without!! the blasphemy!!
where do I start with this
- first of all ryiah fucking ups and steals another girl's manz just like that! she literally fucking goes up to Ian while he's sitting with his girlfriend and asks to dance and flirts with him right there and steals him literally just like that and not to mention the said girlfriend was if not a friend, a mentor who's been nothing more than super nice to her and fucking ryiah!! doesn't even feel guilty or fucking apologize to her (they pretty much start dating the next day and never speak of the gf again)
- second! after going through such lengths (fighting for him as she claimed) to get Ian, you'd think she's gonna take good care of him and love him and such right ohhohoho but noo she still pines for the prince and FUCKING CHEATS ON HIM IN FRONT OF EVERYONE WITH THE PRINCE (who has a fiance who he's basically dating) AFTER ANNOUNCING HER LOVE FOR IAN IN FRONT OF EVERYONE!! mind you Ian loves her sincerely while she half-heartedly says it to prove a point
- and oh that's not all folks, our girl here at this point has both guys waiting for her to make her choice between the two! which if I were Ian I wouldn't even give her the time of the day but this boy just overlooks her cheating and waits for her asdfghjikl and GUESS WHAT!! STUPID FUCKING RHYEA PICKS IAN bc "oh the prince has a fiance and I will never be his but lemme just pick ian bc even tho im still in love with the prince and I don't really really want ian, its for the best bc that's my only choice" BITCH THE BEST FOR WHO?? honestly just give Ian up if only to spare him the heartbreak. you know you didn't pick him bc you loved him, you only picked him bc you couldn't have the prince. by choosing him, you made him believe the prince was just a mistake and you truly loved him instead of the prince. that's honestly so cruel and messed up esp bc Ian was a super close friend of hers. if she had given up both of the boys at that point hhohoho the story would have been already improved SO MUCH but nOoooo
-keep reading folks bc that's not fucking all, this fucking bitch, after all the drama and promise to not run back to the prince, ya you guessed it, she fucking runs back to the prince and that's not even the worst part THIS BITCH FUCKING CHEATS ON HIM AGAIN!!!! BC APPARENTLY SHE FINALLY REALIZES SHE LOVES THE FUCKING PRINCE, BITCHH! COULDN'T YOU HAVE WAITED UNTIL YOU BROKEN UP WITH THE DUDE YOU WERE STILL DATING BEFORE MAKING OUT WITH SOME OTHER DUDE asdfghjkl; I was so fucking done at this point I could barely get through it and oh gawd don't make me start on the prince asdfsdfghjkl;
I was honestly looking so forward to this book and I adored all the character in the previous book but this was a shithole. I had so much hope for ryiah. I only got through this bc I just wanted to hurry and get over with the book already; most disappointing books of the year and I'm not gonna continue with the rest of the series anymore :/ asdfghllagksl I really liked ryiah *sigh*
*sigh* ooof prepare for a full-blown rant
it makes me sad to say this esp bc I adored the first book so much but this was seriously so disappointing :/
where do I even begin
- the pacing was so whack, I get that the author was trying to fit specific timelines in each book but its just too rushed and failed to establish a solid feel of things. certain things felt like a summary while lingering on other things,,,like the whole things was literally training, mock battle, petty stuff, serious fight against enemy but let's just skip all the explanation and go back to the petty unimportant drama the next day and more mock battles like aughasdfghjkl and thus leds me to my next point
- the lack of plot, worldbuilding, and explanation to much-needed things! Idk maybe it's just me but who the fuck is their enemy? who are their allies? why are they attacking? wtf is going on with the apprentice stuff? why do they keep moving and going back to their former school? and A WHOLE lotta other stuff that didn't stick to my brain bc it was so annoying
- and oh gawd the downfall of the whole book, the fucking love triangle!!! + ryiah!!!!! this in itself is a whole another thing! and more than anything im so mad at the fact that this book made me hate romance--something I cannot live without!! the blasphemy!!
where do I start with this
- first of all ryiah fucking ups and steals another girl's manz just like that! she literally fucking goes up to Ian while he's sitting with his girlfriend and asks to dance and flirts with him right there and steals him literally just like that and not to mention the said girlfriend was if not a friend, a mentor who's been nothing more than super nice to her and fucking ryiah!! doesn't even feel guilty or fucking apologize to her (they pretty much start dating the next day and never speak of the gf again)
- second! after going through such lengths (fighting for him as she claimed) to get Ian, you'd think she's gonna take good care of him and love him and such right ohhohoho but noo she still pines for the prince and FUCKING CHEATS ON HIM IN FRONT OF EVERYONE WITH THE PRINCE (who has a fiance who he's basically dating) AFTER ANNOUNCING HER LOVE FOR IAN IN FRONT OF EVERYONE!! mind you Ian loves her sincerely while she half-heartedly says it to prove a point
- and oh that's not all folks, our girl here at this point has both guys waiting for her to make her choice between the two! which if I were Ian I wouldn't even give her the time of the day but this boy just overlooks her cheating and waits for her asdfghjikl and GUESS WHAT!! STUPID FUCKING RHYEA PICKS IAN bc "oh the prince has a fiance and I will never be his but lemme just pick ian bc even tho im still in love with the prince and I don't really really want ian, its for the best bc that's my only choice" BITCH THE BEST FOR WHO?? honestly just give Ian up if only to spare him the heartbreak. you know you didn't pick him bc you loved him, you only picked him bc you couldn't have the prince. by choosing him, you made him believe the prince was just a mistake and you truly loved him instead of the prince. that's honestly so cruel and messed up esp bc Ian was a super close friend of hers. if she had given up both of the boys at that point hhohoho the story would have been already improved SO MUCH but nOoooo
-keep reading folks bc that's not fucking all, this fucking bitch, after all the drama and promise to not run back to the prince, ya you guessed it, she fucking runs back to the prince and that's not even the worst part THIS BITCH FUCKING CHEATS ON HIM AGAIN!!!! BC APPARENTLY SHE FINALLY REALIZES SHE LOVES THE FUCKING PRINCE, BITCHH! COULDN'T YOU HAVE WAITED UNTIL YOU BROKEN UP WITH THE DUDE YOU WERE STILL DATING BEFORE MAKING OUT WITH SOME OTHER DUDE asdfghjkl; I was so fucking done at this point I could barely get through it and oh gawd don't make me start on the prince asdfsdfghjkl;
I was honestly looking so forward to this book and I adored all the character in the previous book but this was a shithole. I had so much hope for ryiah. I only got through this bc I just wanted to hurry and get over with the book already; most disappointing books of the year and I'm not gonna continue with the rest of the series anymore :/ asdfghllagksl I really liked ryiah *sigh*