lexispike 's review for:

Harley Merlin and the Secret Coven by Bella Forrest

1.0

adventurous mysterious medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: No

Loveable characters: No

Diverse cast of characters: Yes

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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Forrest does a great job building up this magical world around the main character, Harley, but Harley feels one-dimensional as a character. The novel doesn’t feel cohesive at all and Harley comes off as a strong woman but then turns around and calls the men around her “alpha males”. There’s not much here to interest me in the next part of the series.