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On Location by Sarah Echavarre Smith
2.5
Strong character development: No

Unrealistic dialogue. All of the conflict between the love interests was due to very easily avoidable miscommunication. It felt repetitive. A lot of focus on the physical attributes that made each character unbelievable “hot”— personally I don’t care for these details. Some steamy scenes but the dialogue still made it feel unrealistic.