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Exit, Pursued by a Bear by E.K. Johnston
3.0
I wanted more character development.
The only character I felt that felt real was Polly.
I wanted some flow to the story.
It seemed choppy at times. The Reverend was mentioned in the beginning, and then suddenly, with no flow, he popped in at a scene in the middle of the book.
There was no alluding. There was just the author telling us how everything was and how everyone was feeling. It felt like the author didn’t trust her audience enough to make the conclusions on their own.
There were too many plot holes.
It was a good story with a good ending but there were lots of issues
The only character I felt that felt real was Polly.
I wanted some flow to the story.
It seemed choppy at times. The Reverend was mentioned in the beginning, and then suddenly, with no flow, he popped in at a scene in the middle of the book.
There was no alluding. There was just the author telling us how everything was and how everyone was feeling. It felt like the author didn’t trust her audience enough to make the conclusions on their own.
There were too many plot holes.
It was a good story with a good ending but there were lots of issues