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A review by cheye13
The Measure by Nikki Erlick
emotional
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
This one fell apart for me early; the strings were not presented/narrated in a way that I could buy in. I didn't understand immediate global ramifications, I didn't believe things would move that fast, I didn't understand why it was such an intense and sustained "big deal." And with this being written post-covid, it felt even more egregious.
It's one of those books that reads like a straightforward MFA thesis. It's trying to say something big and poetic and falls short. It's stuck between a global storyline and a small personal one (when choosing one or the other would've been stronger). There's a "gotcha" set up and predictably executed. It's like the author got some big pieces of feedback and worked them in instead of sitting down and deciding what story to tell first.
I would've preferred a small, central story with Nina, Maura, Amy & Ben, exploring how life precedes with this added knowledge, maybe with some of the big deals amounting to "on the tv in the background" peeks. As is, once it grows to a bigger scale, it raises more questions about the conceit of the strings themselves. All of the deaths on-page are direct results of the strings existence. There's on-the-ground data about the strings (they're not recognizable material, they fog out surveillance). All pointing to in-world answers that we simply never address.
Not a popular comp title, but if you're interested in this, I'd recommend Hank Green's The Carls duology instead.
It's one of those books that reads like a straightforward MFA thesis. It's trying to say something big and poetic and falls short. It's stuck between a global storyline and a small personal one (when choosing one or the other would've been stronger). There's a "gotcha" set up and predictably executed. It's like the author got some big pieces of feedback and worked them in instead of sitting down and deciding what story to tell first.
I would've preferred a small, central story with Nina, Maura, Amy & Ben, exploring how life precedes with this added knowledge, maybe with some of the big deals amounting to "on the tv in the background" peeks. As is, once it grows to a bigger scale, it raises more questions about the conceit of the strings themselves. All of the deaths on-page are direct results of the strings existence. There's on-the-ground data about the strings (they're not recognizable material, they fog out surveillance). All pointing to in-world answers that we simply never address.
Not a popular comp title, but if you're interested in this, I'd recommend Hank Green's The Carls duology instead.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Violence, Gun violence, and Mass/school shootings
Moderate: Medical content
Minor: Car accident, Pregnancy, Terminal illness, War, and Xenophobia
some depictions of desperation (characters fearing for their lives) may be upsetting