A review by bensonblues
Everything the Darkness Eats by Eric LaRocca

dark fast-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? A mix
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? No
• Diverse cast of characters? Yes
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

0.25

A great concept...for a short.

That's then turned into one of the worst pieces of writing I've ever read.
Avoid. Believe me. 

Shock for shock's sake and the most deus ex machina ending. Genuinely, I'd say children could write better work...and do.