A review by sammyreads79
When Day Breaks by Maya Banks

1.0

20 chapters of 38 in and I had to stop trying. This was a “do not finish” for me. There’s no real plot, insta lust is one thing but asking if this is love after one day and no real conversation is insane. There’s no real chemistry nor connection between these characters. And a 23/24 year old virgin who is some sort of super model, give me a break. The lack of realism made it hard to connect to the story. The hero’s insecurities made him unlikeable to me. One scar doesn’t make a war hero doubt his ability to be appealing to the opposite sex. Referring to yourself as a beast to her beauty is contrived and ridiculous. I’m assuming theirs a HEA but I couldn’t wait around for a plot, good dialogue or steamy scenes to find out.