A review by ipross
His Undoing: A Gay For You Erotic Short Story by Aria Grace

4.0

There was something so real about the emotional development of the relationship between Brett and Mike. What started out as s tentative friendship between roommates blossomed into so much more. I loved that the author showed the progression of their relationship, even going as far as writing in an almost perfect girlfriend for Mike. Yet even the most perfect girlfriend could not make him forget the feelings his roommate invoked in him.

A beautifully written story whose only flaw was the lack of a more substantial ending. It seemed a bit rushed to me. Other than that, it was a great read and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more by this author.