A review by kerithesmutslut
Bait by Jade West

3.0

I wanted desperately to love this book. I want to tell you exactly what it was that didn’t work for me, but even I don’t know. I didn’t find this book very erotic, and not because it’s CNC I actually read it because of that very thing. The writing was… off putting to me. So many terms that confused me and I don’t know if it’s because it wasn’t based in the US, but the writing just felt… off. Like it was suppose to be lyrical or flowery or something.

Some of the things this heroine said were just… off putting and not erotic in the slightest. “Two in the pink, one in the stink” I mean are we high school boys or???

I wanted to love this book… but honestly I barely liked it.