sarareadsabook11 's review for:

The Predator by RuNyx

3.0

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Listen this was an OKAY read but the writing was not for me. The writing was very flawed and rudimentary in so many ways, the word milking and NEITHER FOLDS were used and more than once… the story was not resolved and while I realize it’s a series we just got cut off in the middle of the main plot line. I felt like I was reading “your honor” fan fiction for a lot of it. The smut was good. I’ll give the smut a 5. There were just some truly glaring writing flaws I can’t get past, I will not be continuing the series. I just don’t know if mafia romance is for me so if it is for you I totally understand.