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A review by chicks417
Game Over by Kira Roman
2.0
Good plot idea poor execution
So this would be better if it was longer and you didn't have all these names thrown at you. It would also help if their wasn't so much skipping around. Very confusing and hard to stay in the story.
So this would be better if it was longer and you didn't have all these names thrown at you. It would also help if their wasn't so much skipping around. Very confusing and hard to stay in the story.