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Secondborn by Amy A. Bartol
2.0

This could’ve been great…

This concept could have been a great story, but it was poorly executed. Even if we ignore the fact the the h, Roselle, is a giant Mary Sue, there are just too many problems to overcome with this book: there are innumerable plot holes, almost no world-building, and the romance went from a few interactions to “I have loved you since I was ten years old” within 1 page. Ridiculous.