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A review by secre
The City We Became by N.K. Jemisin
dark
mysterious
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
I really enjoyed Jemisin's 'The Broken Earth' series and was really looking forward to reading this one. Unfortunately, it just didn't catch me in the same way. Don't get me wrong, it's interesting, it has interesting characters and a tantalising narrative... but it didn't grip me. I don't think it helped that I found the opening chapters of the novel confusing and it took me a significant period of time to work out what was going on, but I think it's also down to the pacing and the constant switching between characters which made it difficult to pin down a narrative.
It's unique, I'll give it that. Set in a city trying to be born, New York has chosen five avatars, or protectors. Five individuals who will in turn become the city. Manny, or Manhatten, cold and ruthless, somehow threatening even though he doesn't remember his original identity. Bronca, or Bronx, with her mistrust and doubt, even as she becomes a community leader. Brooklyn, musician, lawyer and caretaker. Padmini, Queens, a quiet academic. And Aislyn, Staten Island, isolated and easily manipulated. Each hold a different power, each are rooted to a different section of the city. It's a multi-cultured mixing hub of individuals, as Jemisin points out, much like New York itself.
It's clever and holds a powerful message, but sometimes Jemisin falls into the trap of preaching rather than displaying and the moralising is too overt and self conscious. It's thought provoking and innovative, but it becomes bogged down in the message rather than the plot and therefore loses a lot of what could have been a tautly written plot. There's a lot of repetition as we see the same events through different characters eyes and a lot of bouncing around when it would have been better to be held by two or three main perspectives to pull the narrative forward.
In essence, this has a lot of potential. It's unlike anything I've read before, but it's trying to do too many things and suffers from a lack of cohesion leading to a lot of waffling before we get to the narrative. It's nowhere near as good as Jemisin's Broken Earth series which was frankly, spectacular.
It's unique, I'll give it that. Set in a city trying to be born, New York has chosen five avatars, or protectors. Five individuals who will in turn become the city. Manny, or Manhatten, cold and ruthless, somehow threatening even though he doesn't remember his original identity. Bronca, or Bronx, with her mistrust and doubt, even as she becomes a community leader. Brooklyn, musician, lawyer and caretaker. Padmini, Queens, a quiet academic. And Aislyn, Staten Island, isolated and easily manipulated. Each hold a different power, each are rooted to a different section of the city. It's a multi-cultured mixing hub of individuals, as Jemisin points out, much like New York itself.
It's clever and holds a powerful message, but sometimes Jemisin falls into the trap of preaching rather than displaying and the moralising is too overt and self conscious. It's thought provoking and innovative, but it becomes bogged down in the message rather than the plot and therefore loses a lot of what could have been a tautly written plot. There's a lot of repetition as we see the same events through different characters eyes and a lot of bouncing around when it would have been better to be held by two or three main perspectives to pull the narrative forward.
In essence, this has a lot of potential. It's unlike anything I've read before, but it's trying to do too many things and suffers from a lack of cohesion leading to a lot of waffling before we get to the narrative. It's nowhere near as good as Jemisin's Broken Earth series which was frankly, spectacular.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Racial slurs and Racism