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kristiap 's review for:
The Pucking Wrong Date
by C.R. Jane
TLDR:
Was this a great book? No.
Did I have a good time? Absolutely!
Do I recommend? I don't know.
Will I read the next one? 100%!
Here's the thing, the book followed the same formula as the first two and I still gobbled it up.
-FMC hella family trauma, hella insecurity issues, lack of trust in herself, and lack of love for herself
-MMC obsessed from the moment their eyes meet, will do anything to get the girl, also to save her from aforementioned shitty family
As with the first two, this book desperately needs a new editor, another editor, an editor to begin with, I'm not sure, but it needs more eyes on it before it hit KU.
-Repetition on phrases: "minutes turned into hours" - I counted at least 5 of these in the book, two within the first 17 pages! There has to be another way to tell us about the passage of slow, boring, time.
-Continuity issues! He takes his pants off twice within a 60 second window. At one point the MMC responds to a question never asked by FMC, and not in a way of like "he knows what she's thinking before she says something" very much in a continuation of a conversation, we just missed out on part of the convo.
The introduction of the two new characters who are in the next two books felt a little forced and dropping them both at the same time was hard to track. There was a combo of first name, last name, and nicknames, so I often wasn't sure who we were talking about.
Was this a great book? No.
Did I have a good time? Absolutely!
Do I recommend? I don't know.
Will I read the next one? 100%!
Here's the thing, the book followed the same formula as the first two and I still gobbled it up.
-FMC hella family trauma, hella insecurity issues, lack of trust in herself, and lack of love for herself
-MMC obsessed from the moment their eyes meet, will do anything to get the girl, also to save her from aforementioned shitty family
As with the first two, this book desperately needs a new editor, another editor, an editor to begin with, I'm not sure, but it needs more eyes on it before it hit KU.
-Repetition on phrases: "minutes turned into hours" - I counted at least 5 of these in the book, two within the first 17 pages! There has to be another way to tell us about the passage of slow, boring, time.
-Continuity issues! He takes his pants off twice within a 60 second window. At one point the MMC responds to a question never asked by FMC, and not in a way of like "he knows what she's thinking before she says something" very much in a continuation of a conversation, we just missed out on part of the convo.
The introduction of the two new characters who are in the next two books felt a little forced and dropping them both at the same time was hard to track. There was a combo of first name, last name, and nicknames, so I often wasn't sure who we were talking about.