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1.0
sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

If "The Summer I Turned Pretty" is the perfect summer book, this is a perfect bummer book. (Has anyone else made that witty pun?) Much of the book is devoted to the characters' grief in the immediate aftermath of the death of a beloved family member. While it's realistic that the characters would be devastated by this, it's an awfully heavy topic for a summer beach read, without the redeeming qualities of being profound and life-affirming that you would want or expect in a book about death. Rather, family member death is used mainly as an excuse for teens to be angsty. The light romance elements that defined the first book not only take a backseat, but also feel unsatisfying and unappealing to me.  

I think this wants to be a series with two viable main love interests so that readers can align as either #TeamConrad or #TeamJeremiah, but it just doesn't work because the author has stacked the deck for the guy she's interested in and the other guy never has a chance. This should be the book that makes a clear case for #TeamJeremiah, but it does a worse job than the first book did. While the first book showcased Jeremiah's emotional intelligence and sense of fun - qualities that were never going to win against a complicated bad-boy but which were at least enjoyable - this book simply casts him as a toxically conflict-avoidant doormat. Also, the fact that he continues to pine after Belly despite being clearly rebuffed in the first book gives him a "nice guy" sex pest feel that totally destroys what appeal he had built. Meanwhile, the book invests a lot more in Conrad, but only by having people talk about how great he is - all his actions continue to be repellent. 

Belly is also not developed in this book, as her main role is to stand around and watch boys do things. 

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