A review by titusfortner
Uncanny Magazine Issue 10: May/June 2016 by Julia Rios, Michael Damian Thomas, Lynne M. Thomas, Michi Trota

2.0

This is a 2017 Hugo Nominee for Best Novelette.

The 2nd person narration made this feel more clunky than it might have otherwise. This story has a lot of potential that is never realized. The world is kind of interesting, but I don't emotionally attach to any of the characters and not enough time is spent fleshing out motivations and the dynamics of the interaction.