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A review by moonwolfhowl
The Tales of Arcana Fortune by Hafsa A Jawad

Did not finish book. Stopped at 28%.
I wanted to like this so badly, but it's missing so much... I didn't connect with the characters or story; the humor felt a little juvenile, and everything felt really rushed. There were some basic spelling and grammar issues, and at times, I caught an inconsistency with one character's name. (Reverend Erikkson/Erikson) 

This was a great idea, but it needed to bake in the oven a little longer. Very Kingdom Hearts vibes; I'm sure some people will adore it, and I always want good things for Indie Authors, but this needed a lot of work.