bellcmyblake 's review for:

In a Jam by Kate Canterbary

3.0

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debated what to score this but i felt like the story couldve been shorter and been better for it? i felt like the author tried to do the whole grumpy man thing but he didnt really come across as one just because he was scowling the whole time? i am a man obsessed with woman enthusiast but it felt almost ingenuine at some points because he seemed almost too perfect (my male trauma❤️). the kid was so cute and i loved the backstory w her mom. the dialogue wasnt cringey but sometimes unnatural. consent is sexy but if you wanna do it rough just do it my man omg. and for the love of god stop calling her plush every other sentence