A review by emilmoor
This Won't End Well by Camille Pagán

3.0

it was the format that killed this one for me. the story was told through email correspondence and journal entries, which i don’t usually mind, but it didn’t work with this one. i can’t speak for everyone, but writing the actual dialogue you had in a journal entry doesn’t seem like a thing people do. it just didn’t work for me and the story was boring, honestly.