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erikas_bookshelf 's review for:
Fifty Words for Rain
by Asha Lemmie
I didn’t like it. It was neither plot driven nor Character driven.
- The story has a lot of useless parts and passages and the other narrators were useless to the story except of Akira. I would have loved to read more of his pov.
- I was not able to connect with Nori and so I was not able to care for her and feel her pain.
There were also cuts in the narration that made it hard to read (every time Nori hurts herself). It had potential and the narration was not too bad, but it felt empty.
- The story has a lot of useless parts and passages and the other narrators were useless to the story except of Akira. I would have loved to read more of his pov.
- I was not able to connect with Nori and so I was not able to care for her and feel her pain.
There were also cuts in the narration that made it hard to read (every time Nori hurts herself). It had potential and the narration was not too bad, but it felt empty.