thombe 's review for:

Moorewood Family Rules by HelenKay Dimon
2.0

The writing is clumsy, the characters all have the same snarky personality, and the change in narrator is inconsistent and unnecessary. So much of Jillian's inner musings on guilt and revenge could've been edited out and saved me 50 pages. And for a family that prided itself on their griftting talents, no one double checked each other's research into the marks. Sounded like Jillian checked up on Beck and didn't check up on Beck and gets into a whirlwind romance in the middle of her revenge fantasy. Did not like this one