A review by imme_van_gorp
Hot Head by Damon Suede

2.0

|| 2.0 stars ||

This was honestly not all that. The premise definitely had potential, but I was unfortunately not really feeling it.

I did not connect with the characters, and I think it had a lot to do with their completely erratic and inconsistent behaviour. One time they act a certain way, and then another they act entirely different. I could not get a good grip on their personality. It was jarring and annoying.

The language also wasn’t exactly for me and there is a lot of narration rather than dialogue. The latter doesn’t have to be a bad thing, but it certainly made the story more likely to be boring. Which, in this case, it kind of was.

Everything was a bit abstract and although the main character, Griffin, had a lot of feelings, he hardly ever acted on them. He was insecure about every single thing, even though he is apparently the hottest and most amazing person ever.. He just doesn’t know that himself for some inexplicable reason. *sigh*