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A review by ladymcgrace
(Watch Me) Break You by Avril Ashton
dark
emotional
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
It was good. Not bad,
I don't like how we skated past the gun rape Scene and yes it was rape. Dima didn't apologize, they didn't talk about it, nje it was dead Silence on that. (I say its rape cause technically X didn't consent to having a gun up hisπ)
The reason i'm giving it a 3.5 π Is how Avril wrote the whipping. It's not my cup of tea, but I was not repulsed by. It I kind of enjoyed it to some degree.π¬π©ππΎββοΈπ€£
I'll never understand how people get off from being physically whipped.Or get off from pain neh, but Avril wrote it so beautifully that I could feel the love between the 2 of them even though one was inflicting pain on another.
when Dima was at the Club and Said the whipping was not the same I sobbed,π©π, the same that proceeded was my favourite. X whipping Dima, and there being no cries, no beggings, no moarns from Dima and X wanting them from dima, him apolosing while flocking Dima, then finally Dima cryingπ©πβ₯οΈπ₯Ίπ₯
the pacing was a bit off for me cause everything happened so quickly, like jiki jiki X was passionately, deeply in love, kanjani manje
I don't like how we skated past the gun rape Scene and yes it was rape. Dima didn't apologize, they didn't talk about it, nje it was dead Silence on that. (I say its rape cause technically X didn't consent to having a gun up hisπ)
The reason i'm giving it a 3.5 π Is how Avril wrote the whipping. It's not my cup of tea, but I was not repulsed by. It I kind of enjoyed it to some degree.π¬π©ππΎββοΈπ€£
I'll never understand how people get off from being physically whipped.Or get off from pain neh, but Avril wrote it so beautifully that I could feel the love between the 2 of them even though one was inflicting pain on another.
when Dima was at the Club and Said the whipping was not the same I sobbed,π©π, the same that proceeded was my favourite. X whipping Dima, and there being no cries, no beggings, no moarns from Dima and X wanting them from dima, him apolosing while flocking Dima, then finally Dima cryingπ©πβ₯οΈπ₯Ίπ₯
the pacing was a bit off for me cause everything happened so quickly, like jiki jiki X was passionately, deeply in love, kanjani manje