A review by novelbloglover
Daddy Morebucks by Normandie Alleman

adventurous emotional funny lighthearted fast-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.75

 

Book Review 

Title: Daddy Morebucks (Daddy’s Girl Book 1) by Normandie Alleman 

Genre: Erotic, Romance 

Rating: 2.75 Stars 

Daddy Morebucks was definitely a novel that closely followed the classic BDSM erotic formula which was a shame as in the Daddy/Little Girl dynamic it always focuses on the same elements which diving deeper into it which would have been a refreshing look into the sub-genre. We are introduced to Marley who is currently working as a prostitute because of her circumstances when she is approached by Milton to works for James LeBlanc. Due to his boss’ strange sexual taste he normally finds James street workers willing to sign an NDA before meeting with him from an agency but the girl that was supposed to meet with James that night is ill and Milton is desperately looking for a replacement and finds Marley in a bar. 

After explaining a little about James’ kinks and what he wants from the women along with the $5,000 price tag Marley agrees to meet with James even if she finds his kinks a little strange. Milton takes her to James where they spend the night together and we get to learn a little more about James and his kinks and how Marley fits into that dynamic even if it is only for a night. James and Marley fit together pretty well in terms of casual sex and he even lets her stay the night before sending her home the next day. Marley uses the money from her night with James to get herself off the street and into an apartment and finds herself a regular job moving on with her life. Meanwhile, James can’t forget about Marley and hires a private investigator to track her down because she doesn’t have a phone of her own and pays her a visit. Marley is obviously surprised to see James and enjoys spending time with him but she doesn’t know what he wants from her. 

James explains that he hasn’t wanted to see the same woman twice in a long time and makes Marley to offer of becoming his full time sub even moving in with him in exchange for having all of her expenses paid. Marley struggles with her indecision for a little while as she doesn’t really know James but she grew up in a life of poverty and being unwanted by her alcoholic mother. She did have her brother for support until he was killed in Afghanistan and since then she has been alone. Eventually, she takes James offer and for a time everything is great but more and more Marley is feeling like a kept woman and while she doesn’t want to leave James she does want to repay him for everything he has done for her so she arrange a threesome with another sub which is in-between Daddies right now. Everything seems to be going well until James fucks the other woman which sparks a jealousy in Marley that she didn’t know was there and she flees to a friend’s house for the night. 

James obviously goes after her when he realises she is gone as the threesome was Marley’s idea but she doesn’t want to talk to him. During this time James falls into a depression to the point he can’t even pretend to enjoy Christmas with his family as all his attention and focus is on Marley. Upon learning Marley has return to their shared penthouse he returns home where they have a serious discussion about what went wrong that night and she explains that she still feels like a whore because he sleeps in a separate room and doesn’t really interact with her much outside of their sexual activities. James explains back that this was because he didn’t want her to feel pressured into giving him more than she wanted to because of their arrangement and I love you’s are exchanged between them. Obviously there is a happy ending for the pair and while I don’t think I will be picking up anymore in the series I was satisfied with the story here. That being said, I did find the writing and dialogue absolutely cringe worthy at times but if you can get past this then it might be worth picking up but the writing and dialogue really put me off at times despite loving the characters and their story so overall not for me.