A review by cassiecollins
The Elven King's Love by Devon Vesper

lighthearted slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5

Finally, some conflict! Too bad it didn't show up until three-quarters in and was resolved in so many pages. The issue of redundant dialogue in the first entry is present in the second as well. I also found the dates and other scenes far too drawn out—I was scanning through a lot of them by the halfway point. The dual perspectives became somewhat of an issue, because several times the same scene would be repeated almost word-for-word from Dustin's viewpoint and Casersis's rather than making their descriptions unique. I hope we get to see more of Erastus soon.