A review by systemofanoun
Things Have Gotten Worse Since We Last Spoke by Eric LaRocca

dark fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? N/A
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.5

From beginning to end there was so much disconnect, I don’t know how this novella received so much praise honestly. Even going in with extremely low expectations I was still let down.

The characters are so one dimensional, they come off silly and unreal and just stay that way. 
If I had to say something nice about it I’d say the concept and overall theme could’ve made for a compelling story.
Two individuals, one vulnerable and timorous the other opportunistic and perverse. Corresponding online, quickly becoming seemingly co-dependent but ultimately toxic before spiraling out of control. The concept is actually realistic in that way

The writing wasn’t nearly tactful enough though, so it failed.

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