dira 's review for:

The Unwanted Wife by Natasha Anders
2.0

putting the actual storyline aside, this book has so much run on sentences. Majority of the writing feels stilted and awkward because the author keep using and and and instead if using you know, period. i also think the vocabulary choice is kind of... bad at some parts?? it just doesnt really do much to emphasise the situation at hand and it makes the story less serious than it actually is