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A review by theamyleblanc
First Quiver by Beth C. Greenberg
Did not finish book.
I received a copy of this story from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
DNF: 23%
I love all ancient mythology and the characters. I was hoping this would be the start of a great series that breathes new life into some of my favorites.
Unfortunately, I couldn't keep reading.
First, everything moves quickly even though nothing really happens. Second, it seems to strive for campy but comes across as ridiculous and absurd. Third, the point of view switches within a chapter and that's just lazy storytelling. And how are we supposed to believe that Cupid hooks up with a mortal within mere hours of being on Earth?! It wasn't even good.
Nothing in me cared for this portrayal of the characters. The tension between Cupid and Pan is forced and awkward. Oh, and should we talk about the consent issues created by Cupid's "charisma"?
This just isn't worth my time.
DNF: 23%
I love all ancient mythology and the characters. I was hoping this would be the start of a great series that breathes new life into some of my favorites.
Unfortunately, I couldn't keep reading.
First, everything moves quickly even though nothing really happens. Second, it seems to strive for campy but comes across as ridiculous and absurd. Third, the point of view switches within a chapter and that's just lazy storytelling. And how are we supposed to believe that Cupid hooks up with a mortal within mere hours of being on Earth?! It wasn't even good.
Nothing in me cared for this portrayal of the characters. The tension between Cupid and Pan is forced and awkward. Oh, and should we talk about the consent issues created by Cupid's "charisma"?
This just isn't worth my time.