A review by callen_charlemagne
Go Hunt Me by Kelly deVos

2.0

So poorly written that it barely made sense. In one case, the characters had been shouting for "Maddie" for pages, and then suddenly it was "Maggie is dead." What editor let that through? Also, I like the idea of the feminist message, but it got lost in clunky, slapped-together dialogue, choppy action, and random preachy speeches. Not to mention that the narrator's true feelings and actions are not clear at all because rather than reveal things gradually through hints, she saves all the reveals for the last two pages. Sloppy and disappointing, reads like a kids' fanfic.