A review by lizeylu
Tangled by Simone Elise

1.0

Decided to read this because it was free on kindle unlimited and saw it as a suggestion on Insta. I felt like this had so much potential but really just fell flat. The plot could have worked really well, it just felt like it was a lot of “telling” rather than “showing”. Instead of describing emotions, it was like “she was upset”. Also there were just a bunch of editing errors that just make it feel like it was super rushed as a book. In the end I didn’t like any characters, the scenes that could have been super intense were just plain bad and there was close to no character development. Some things could have just been left out so more important scenes could be dragged out (in a good way).