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Undulate by Elodie Hart
2.0
lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

I thought i was gonna like this dynamic better but it bothered me a bit that the fmc’s age kept getting repeated and how she was so much younger than the mmc. Once or twice was enough but it was spread out throughout the whole book. Like we get it the age gap is age gapping. I appreciated the spicy scenes but i didnt feel like it was well balanced enough in comparison to the plot to the point where i dont think i got to know the main characters’ personality bc all the did was hump each other. The side plot of him being a widow as well idk just didnt like the taste it left on my mouth when she’d get mentioned at times where theyd also be doing it. It was meh overall. The guy had potential bc i love my hot single nerdy dads but couldve been executed better with a well written fmc

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