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The Chief by Monica McCarty
4.0

***3.5***

I did like it, but...

I was a bit frustrated at how one-sided the relationship was. To my mind, when you have a heroine essentially throwing herself at a cold hero the entire book, at some point he's got to grovel - I mean REALLY grovel - to prove he deserves someone who so adores him.

I don't feel like that happened here. There was a turning point, of course, but ... he didn't have to do much to earn her back, aside from just expressing interest, for like the first time ever.

*sigh*