A review by always_anxious
The Cockpit by Ava Olsen

2.0

I tried to like this, I really did but I just couldn’t. I finished it out of pure determination. I didn’t like the main MCs, I was actually more interested in Willem and Nial’s romance.

BUT WHAT DROVE ME CRAZY?
The OVERUSE or ‘murmur’ and ‘quip ‘
It was like the dialogue was being cycled through said, murmured and quipped. How are they murmuring from across the boat ???? Why was it used in over other phrase