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Pain in the Axe by Daphne Elliot
DID NOT FINISH: 45%

This book is adorable, love both of the characters but there's a lot wrong with it. 
1. Chole mentioning every other page how his "manly" smell is getting to her, how every part of her is sticking up because of a man she claims to HATE from pg 1 (like I'd think you wouldn't react that way) 
2. It's just way too slow paced and way too long for what it strives to be a steamy romance with a pregnancy twist. Like this book could be shorter if they just sat down and had a 3 hour convo about everything that happened between them, authors shouldn't be afraid to have a short book, as long as the content is good. 
I didn't feel like waiting this whole book for them to get together, despite that I like both main characters. I just don't have the patience.