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A review by katskinner
The Mayor of Noobtown by Ryan Rimmel
2.0
Three chapters in and you can no longer count on two hands how many pee or pop jokes there have been. It’s a lot. It’s like a 13 year old wrote the story and thought they were funny.
It really isn’t funny to listen to the hero purposefully pee on another character. Nope.
The stats are ridiculous. Overwhelming amount of them and they distract terribly from the actual action and events of the story. Rather than reading a fight scene, it’s a list of stats going up and down most of the time with a few lines of description thrown in.
Oh and the backstory of “I had wife and kids” and immediately just gives up on them and goes about new life… no shock, no plans to get home… just moved on like the other characters mean nothing to him. Is the hero a psychopath?
Dnf. Could not finish.
It really isn’t funny to listen to the hero purposefully pee on another character. Nope.
The stats are ridiculous. Overwhelming amount of them and they distract terribly from the actual action and events of the story. Rather than reading a fight scene, it’s a list of stats going up and down most of the time with a few lines of description thrown in.
Oh and the backstory of “I had wife and kids” and immediately just gives up on them and goes about new life… no shock, no plans to get home… just moved on like the other characters mean nothing to him. Is the hero a psychopath?
Dnf. Could not finish.