A review by aksmith92
Kingdom of Ash by Sarah J. Maas

adventurous dark emotional hopeful mysterious sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5

Oh my....the war kept going and going and going and going annnddd.....

The setup (note: maybe some slight spoilers since this is the final book in the Throne of Glass series; I tried to make it as least spoiler-y as possible): Aelin is MIA and going through it; she's captured by the villain Maeve who I'm still so confused about, but regardless is quite ruthless alongside her weird "pet" named Cairn. Fenrys is there with Aelin, too, and they play an awful blinking game to ensure they know the other is ok [spoiler, they are not!].

The gang is all separated - Rowan, likely bawling every second, is with Lorcan, Gavriel, and Elide, who are all on the hunt to find Aelin. Dorian is traveling with some witches, including Manon, who pretends not to like Dorian at all, which is most certainly a lie. Chaol is still traveling from the southern continent with his new wife, Yrene, whom he married in 2.5 seconds flat; they are on their way to aid Terrasen with warriors. Aedion, Lysandra, and a bunch of others are fighting non-stop in Terrasen, constantly being told by some old dude named Darrow that they are ding dongs.

The connection? Fighting the infamous Vlag, "demons" from another world accidentally left in Erilea because of one of Aelin's ancestors. Oops! There are about 200 (ok, maybe not, but it seemed like it) other sub-plots that somehow connect, which is bananas. Anyway, this nearly 1,000-page novel is about the final battle (um, "final" 100 battles, maybe) between those in Erilea and the Vlag.

Buckle up! I have a lot to say about this novel. Notoriously, I've been relatively pessimistic about SJM's works. Almost everything I've read has been 3 or 3.5 stars (including the books in her ACOTAR series!), and this is the first book I've given below three stars, and it is my LEAST favorite novel I've read by SJM. It's important to me to describe why because this woman gets one million accolades about her work when this, to me, seems like cheap writing. Listen, I speed-read through her books. My brain goes *poof, off*, and if I don't think too hard, they can be somewhat entertaining. That is why none of her works are 1-star reviews for me. Buuuuuuuuut, I must shout to the world that these are not works of art, AND at times can be problematic. Let's jump riiiiiight in.

What I Liked: Hm, it was readable. I was invested this far. I wanted to know how SJM wrapped some things up and how she tied bows around specific plot points. I liked some characters in the previous books, including Lysandra, Elide, Lorcan, Manon, and Dorian; I was ready to see what became of them. I'll share more below, but I was disappointed in the character development. I still enjoyed Manon and Lysandra (outside of the men), and there were not too many blatant plot holes (if you don't think too hard).

What I Didn't Like: My main frustration was that almost every character is the same. Here it goes: has confidence that is closer to arrogance; is always ready to fight in whatever "profession" they've deemed appropriate: warrior, healer, rider, etc.; is always ready to go with absolutely zero hours of sleep; shares some funny sayings once in a while; is beautiful in every possible way; likely has a "thing" that prevents them from being their best selves and holds them back, but not too far back, they're still perfect; is strong; and is somehow touched by a god, destined to be INCREDIBLE, is a descendent from a royal line, or is a queen/king. Who did I describe? Literally every single character. In previous books, I liked Manon and Lorcan because they veered on morally grey. I enjoyed Yrene and Elide because they were more passive in some ways. However, this book's characters seemed to lose their uniqueness in every way, and it bothered me to no end.

On a similar note, SJM seemed to have a stakes problem. I'm not saying I need main characters to die - I think sometimes that works and other times it doesn't! - but every single character was just the BEST! They might have hit some obstacles, but I knew that those obstacles wouldn't be meaningful in any way, and they would overcome them in one second or pull some magic out of their butt (that happened regularly). I wasn't worried about any of the main characters (i.e., those with a POV, AKA like 14 characters, lol) at any point, even when those obstacles surfaced. Honestly, this led to me not caring much about them. 

Lastly, this book should have been shorter. There were so many overdone battle scenes and moments or some POVs we didn't need (I'm looking at you, Evangeline!). I was so over it that my capacity for the final-final battle scene was so low. 

On a random note, I still think that Arobynn Hamel should have been the main villain throughout this whole series. He was layered and interesting, and you truly loved to hate him. The other villains in here seemed distant and I couldn't really understand them. I know it's a personal problem - people will choose how they feel about villains, but I generally need to understand them a bit. 

Below, I bullet out some specific "what the f" moments within this book that contributed to my low rating. Spoilers ahead!
  • -There were like 6-8 heterosexual couples existing at once, and we had to hear about them all being mates all the time.
    -Dorian managed to shapeshift in less than two days, and while he "practiced," it all seemed pretty unbelievable. 
    -SJM loved to romanticize war - "just under 500 deaths." "Good! Not as bad as it could have been." ~onwards to another battle, and not one single cares about the deaths~.
    -Fenrys could suddenly break the blood oath, yes, with some consequence, but he did it ~magically~. [The blood oath is confusing anyway.]
    -Yrene was supposed to be the Healer on High and the best healer in the world with 18 million tonics, even though her magic mostly does the healing (??). Also, she had all those tonics, and not one prevented a pregnancy during a literal war. There were lots of pro-life statements peppered in this narrative, too.
    -The Vlag were apparently afraid of fire, hence why they were petrified of Aelin. Somehow, in the military and war strategy, everyone seemed to forget this fact and didn't plan on bringing any fire to the table. It changed a little bit near the middle/end, but they still made it seem like this revolutionary thing when they never tried.....fire....
    -Manon begging for Dorian - that whole scene about marriage and Dorian being like "nah" because he "just knew" that Manon wouldn't want that without actually talking about it - was no bueno. Also, the Manon I've read about would do NONE of that—character regression at its finest.
    -In Tower of Dawn, the Kaghanate knew everything because they had spies everywhere. Now, in this book, they knew NOTHING! Their interesting territory world-building fell through the cracks. And, instead, we got the random dude named Nox from Book 1 to be the messenger. Weak.
    -I have to admit, I find it funny that the Ironteeth witches were all like, "The Crochans are pretty much wiped out since we've butchered and killed them all - ha ha!" Then, there were over 5,000 fighting in battle. Ok! Also, Terrasen's ancient Fae showing up at the end for funsies was ridiculous.
    -Death and sacrifice were important themes, which I hate because yikes. In this book, Aedion was a JERK to Lysandra, and guess what? Lysandra gave him a chance once their lives were in danger. Lorcan and Elide said some pretty yucky things to each other and wanted nothing to do with each other until *ding, ding, ding* death stood in the way. This theme also impacted Gavriel and Aedion's relationship, and the list goes on. 
    -Thank goodness, after all that, Aelin still had access to tons of coins to live her lavish lifestyle. Phew, I was worried!

As you can see, I had some sh*t to say! Officially, I am done reading SJM; I don't think I can head into the next series of Crescent City. I need a long break, if not a final departure from SJM. 

Thank you for coming to my TED Talk. 

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