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A review by lbean1975
The Gatekeeper's Sons by Eva Pohler
1.0
Sorry I downloaded this...possible spoilers.
I'm sorry, but I was extremely disappointed by this. The jumping from reality to dreamworld was annoying, and could have been better demarcated. The characters were... Juvenile. Which would be understandable as they are teenagers (the lead is what, 15?) except we are supposed to believe the lead is mature enough to (a) fall in love, and (b) be both willing to kill to avenge her parents while also realizing that isn't the answer.
And let's not get started on the fact we have an immortal willing to marry a freaking child. Ew.
Will NOT be recommending or reading further.
As an aside, can we address the poor writing skills of this person in charge of teaching writing?
I'm sorry, but I was extremely disappointed by this. The jumping from reality to dreamworld was annoying, and could have been better demarcated. The characters were... Juvenile. Which would be understandable as they are teenagers (the lead is what, 15?) except we are supposed to believe the lead is mature enough to (a) fall in love, and (b) be both willing to kill to avenge her parents while also realizing that isn't the answer.
And let's not get started on the fact we have an immortal willing to marry a freaking child. Ew.
Will NOT be recommending or reading further.
As an aside, can we address the poor writing skills of this person in charge of teaching writing?