candece 's review for:

This Mortal Coil by Emily Suvada
1.0

So first of all this book is very heavy on sci-fi. Most of the book was very unbelievable. I felt like the more the author tried to explain everything in the book the more boring it became. The MC made me want to strangle her at every turn. She was just stupid. But made out to be a genius. The insta love her and Cole just all of the sudden had going on was very unbelievable... Once everything started to happen in the book the more the author had to explain which took away from the action and just made the whole action scene slow and boring. Then all of the sudden the MC’s father made for into a mortar.

Toward the end when the big conspiracy theory was reveals I was thoroughly unimpressed and it just made the book even more stupid and wholly unpredictable. I have hated this book from start to finish and will not read the other book in this series. The entire book was silly and so far fetched and unbelievable that it felt like the author just started making shit up as she went to make the book longer and more interesting.

And on one more note about the main character, this chick is such a mortar, she takes the blame for everything even when she finds out she has been the victim the whole time this chick here still says “its all my fault”… b***h please! 😒I hate her so much! And then at the end when she had a chance to end it all and finish off the bad guy, she throws the gun down! WTF??? Did I say I hated her yet?! Because I really do. This was an awful book and I wouldn’t suggest anyone ever read it.