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A review by jess_xoxo
Part of Your World by Abby Jimenez
emotional
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
It's a cute read! But...
There's some things I wasn't a fan of.
Without getting into details, it was very repetitive. Daniel's POV and Alexis's POV were extremely similar and it felt like they were the same person. Their inner thoughts and the way they talk was too much alike. Maybe that's why I felt it was so repetitive : I read Alexis' POV and then Daniel's or vice-versa and a lot of time it felt like I was reading almost the same thing twice.
The story could have been 200 pages shorter and it would have been better in my opinion. Somewhere between the 40% mark to the 65% mark I wanted to DNF but also wanted to know how it ends even if it was predictable and I kept going. The pace of the story finally picked up and the end was good.
There's some things I wasn't a fan of.
Without getting into details, it was very repetitive. Daniel's POV and Alexis's POV were extremely similar and it felt like they were the same person. Their inner thoughts and the way they talk was too much alike. Maybe that's why I felt it was so repetitive : I read Alexis' POV and then Daniel's or vice-versa and a lot of time it felt like I was reading almost the same thing twice.
The story could have been 200 pages shorter and it would have been better in my opinion. Somewhere between the 40% mark to the 65% mark I wanted to DNF but also wanted to know how it ends even if it was predictable and I kept going. The pace of the story finally picked up and the end was good.