michellewords 's review for:

2.0

Is exposition still exposition if it's about a potential future child?
This novella is about a rich dude, who goes to this company that helps genetically engineer your children before birth to be really cool in a few ways.
He's presented with three possible children histories, but finds himself in a bar later and stuff happens.
The voice of this one was really hard for me. I didn't connect with any of the characters and the plot itself felt a little messy. I wanted a more fulfilling conclusion too. It ended so abruptly and didn't really make sense to me.
This is forgettable and didn't do anything different.