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A review by terriaminute
At the Corner of Rock Bottom & Nowhere by L.A. Witt
3.0
First, the good. I loved the sweetness between these characters. That's what carried me through this story, plus I know Witt's good for a HEA that leaves me satisfied. Their circumstances were realistic enough that the conflict did not bug me. It felt really well supported and sad from both sides.
That said, this could have used a fierce edit to eliminate repetition. It's not that long a book. Really unnecessary to repeat reasoning more than once, in full. Witt also has dialog phrases that nearly every single character she writes uses, which is LAZY. "Don't mention it." "Tell me about it." A couple more. I long for an editor who will call her on this.
That said, this could have used a fierce edit to eliminate repetition. It's not that long a book. Really unnecessary to repeat reasoning more than once, in full. Witt also has dialog phrases that nearly every single character she writes uses, which is LAZY. "Don't mention it." "Tell me about it." A couple more. I long for an editor who will call her on this.