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Part of my brain kept wanting to think of this as a fantasy novel, but then a character would step onto a shuttle to travel from a moon to a planet, and it became sci-fi again.
I enjoyed the Middle Eastern influence on the worldbuilding and actually would have liked to see even more.
We can see that Amani enjoys reading poetry, but her aspiration of being a poet is questionable. We only see her trying to write poetry once, and she gives up quickly.
The romance between Idris and Amani was underwhelming. If he had turned out to also be a body double, I would have been a lot more interesting.
The problem with first-person narration is that we only know what is going on in the narrator's head. Idris and Marram would be more interesting characters if the reader could see what's they're thinking and why they're doing things.
I enjoyed the Middle Eastern influence on the worldbuilding and actually would have liked to see even more.
We can see that Amani enjoys reading poetry, but her aspiration of being a poet is questionable. We only see her trying to write poetry once, and she gives up quickly.
The romance between Idris and Amani was underwhelming. If he had turned out to also be a body double, I would have been a lot more interesting.
The problem with first-person narration is that we only know what is going on in the narrator's head. Idris and Marram would be more interesting characters if the reader could see what's they're thinking and why they're doing things.