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余污 [Yu Wu] by Rou Bao Bu Chi Rou
3.0

3/5

Angst written for the sake of angst sure is a turn off and makes the angst boring.

Meatbun’s writing is beautiful but it feels too much dragged later. I was re-reading yuwu first few chapters and as I recalled the entire plot, I realized how terrible the plot execution is as the author tries to insert every idea she had for the novel, introduces characters and new plots messily. Moreover, I read this before 2ha and while I was reading 2ha.. there were many similarities. And no, it isn’t because they share same universe.