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3.0

As I was reading this, I missed having a friend read it at the same time - so I would have someone to shout to about the frustrating discontinuities and lack of editing. I know this is how DG writes (a bit here, a bit there, eventually sticking them together) but the number of times we had the same thing described (as if it was the first time we'd seen that place) just felt like there was no time for a substantive edit. Is it fun to just sink back into the world building? Yes, sometimes. Is there a plot arc? Eh....

I'm glad I got this from the library.